The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows data
of
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some land
is
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vital income
sources
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in 2005,2015 and future anticipations for 2025
Overall
,
diary
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dairy
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products
and international tourism made up relatively the same proportion of
exports
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were made
products
so a slight decrease throughout the given period In the
year
2005 meat
products
stood right at $4
billion
in the next two decades
this
figure modestly decreases to reach around two $5
billion
in
year
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2025
On the other hand
in
year
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2005 diary
products
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products'
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total earnings
was
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at $4.5
billion
in the following
year
this
number increased significantly achieving just under $8
billion
which is
the
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similar predicted number of international
tourism
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in 2025. speaking of which international tourism number in 2005 was approximately $6
billion
this
figure continues to increase reaching $8
billion
in
year
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2025.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words products, year, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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