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The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows data
of
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on
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 some land
is
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as
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 vital income
sources
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source
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 in 2005,2015 and future anticipations for 2025
Overall
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,
diary
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dairy
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products
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 and international tourism made up relatively the same proportion of
exports
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exported
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 were made
products
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 so a slight decrease throughout the given period In the
year
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 2005 meat
products
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 stood right at $4
billion
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 in the next two decades
this
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 figure modestly decreases to reach around two $5
billion
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 in
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year
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 2025
On the other hand
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 in
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year
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 2005 diary
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products
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products'
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 total earnings
was
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 at $4.5
billion
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 in the following
year
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this
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 number increased significantly achieving just under $8
billion
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 which is
the
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 similar predicted number of international
tourism
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 in 2025. speaking of which international tourism number in 2005 was approximately $6
billion
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this
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 figure continues to increase reaching $8
billion
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 in
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year
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 2025.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words products, year, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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