The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows data
of
some land Change preposition
on
is
vital income Correct your spelling
as
sources
in 2005,2015 and future anticipations for 2025
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source
Overall
, diary
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dairy
products
and international tourism made up relatively the same proportion of exports
were made Wrong verb form
exported
products
so a slight decrease throughout the given period
In the year
2005 meat products
stood right at $4 billion
in the next two decades this
figure modestly decreases to reach around two $5 billion
in year
2025
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the year
On the other hand
in year
2005 diary Add an article
the year
products
total earnings Change noun form
products'
product's
was
at $4.5 Change the verb form
were
billion
in the following year
this
number increased significantly achieving just under $8 billion
which is the
similar predicted number of international Correct article usage
a
tourism
in 2025. speaking of which international tourism number in 2005 was approximately $6 Replace the word
tourists
billion
this
figure continues to increase reaching $8 billion
in year
2025.Change the article
the year
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