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The process diagram details the steps by which pineapples are produced for sale.

The picture illustrates the way in which
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 are prepared for sale.
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, the procedure of manufacturing
pineapples
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 is comprised of nineteen stages, beginning with
pineapples
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 being under the exposure of sun at certain degrees and ending with various purposes for each size. All
pineapples
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 ripen between 28 and 29 Celsius degree. In the beginning, the smallest
pineapples
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 are 26 centimetres.
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, their sizes and weights increase to 28 and 30 sm weighing 1 and 2 kgs within 7 and 5 months respectively. In the next stage, all
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 are washed in tap water and divided into 3 groups. All small
pineapples
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 are gathered in the first group. The next two stages include cutting off their stems and clearing their peels. Peeled
pineapples
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 go to the extractor where the juice is extracted from them so that they can be put on sale. The medium
pineapples
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 undergo the same process, except for the
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 stage. Their stems are removed after which peels of
pineapples
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 are cleared and cut into different pieces. Eventually, these cut-down pieces of
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 are pressed into a can for sale. The largest ones serve a different purpose in comparison to others. First of all, they are waxed and
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 placed into wooden boxes. Afterwards, they are exported by water to end-users.

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