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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace. Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some
people
 believe that technology provides a great option for distance working nowadays ,
while
 others claim that it may have a negative influence on their future working abilities.There are two sides to the statement that should be taken into consideration. First of all,
people
 can enjoy their own life
while
 working remotely.
For example
, they may have a meeting online at home and spend their time with children afterwards or even go to the cinema.
Besides
, travelling and working are
also
 considered to be a good way of relaxation.
That is
 why, those
people
 always have a lot of time for their hobbies ,
as well as
 earning money.
On the other hand
,there might be some disadvantages to
this
 mobility.
Firstly
,the lack of real communication with colleagues, which later may cause misunderstanding .
Secondly
, if the person is not going to lead an active way of life, it may produce some health problems later on.
Thirdly
,
people
 are just relying on internet sources blindly, in order to get the solution without applying their own knowledge. Because of that, after analyzing all mentioned aspects above, mobility may have a negative impact on
people
's lives. In conclusion, I would like to point out that I do agree with the idea that working mobility may cause main health problems in future.
For instance
 ,I
also
 had
such
 an issue before when I was losing consciousness during the day and as I figured out later it was because I was spending most of my time working on a computer .
Although
,
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 it is the latest innovation in the working sphere,
people
 still need real communication.
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