Many supermarkets are selling more and more imported foods instead of seling locally produced foods? What are the reasons for this? İs this positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, eating imported
food
or local
food
is one of the most controversial issues that people like debating about. Thanks to the globalisation in the
food
markets, now we have more
chance
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to choose
our
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food
in
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our daily meals. At
this
point,
supermarkets
face some problems. They have to provide various
food
by offering imported
food
for
customers
and
also
assume local
produces
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. I will explain why
this
event
occur
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to
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supermarkets
and discuss
about
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negative
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a negative
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and positive
effect
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. There are some reasons why
supermarkets
want to display imported
food
.
Firstly
, imported
food
is far less expensive than local
food
.
This
is because local
foods
are organic,
organic
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foods
are always expensive.
Secondly
, by providing a variety of
food
to
customers
,
supermarkets
can earn a lot of money. If supermarket
marchandises
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merchandise
are limited,
customers
would not go to the market. At the same time, these reasons can be
as
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a positive development, because through
this
,
customers
thesedays
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these days
have a various chance to choose their
food
with
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reasonable price.
On the other hand
, a negative effect
also
exists. If a
citys'
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main economic
activitiy
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activity
is selling local
food
,
this
local economy would
effected
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by selling imported
foods
in local
supermarkets
.
At
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a result,
this
process may follow local production down. So, at
this
point, local government should take a measure to balance between producing local
foods
and selling imported
foods
in their
supermarkets
. In conclusion, local government should play an important role in
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of selling
foods
in
supermarkets
to balance these good and
harm
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effects.
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