Differences between countries are becoming less evident nowadays. People tend to have the same films, music, brands, TV channels, and so on. To what extent do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

There might be contentious debates regarding the issue of whether it is advantageous for

countries

increasingly to become similar or not. The opponent could disagree with my

opinion

.

However

, I strongly believe that it is a kind of globalization, and there are more merits than demerits. In

this

regard, I will write

this

essay to elucidate my

opinion

. On the one hand, some people assume that there are more disadvantages to

become

Wrong verb form

becoming

show examples

less

Change the quantifier

fewer

show examples

differences between

countries

, and there are two grounds to underpin

this

opinion

. First of all, these days, there are a lot of exchanges between

countries

, and the own cultures of

countries

are disappearing. It could exert a considerably negative effect on the diversity of culture.

Furthermore

, in most cases, the exchange between

countries

may be one way.

For example

, the culture especially the popular culture of developed

countries

tend

Correct subject-verb agreement

tends

show examples

to spread to developing

countries

,

thus

, the phenomenon could cause the cultures of specific

countries

to disappear. Considering the statement above, the first insistence could be believed to be acceptable. As far as the other

opinion

hand, becoming fewer differences between

countries

has various positive influences on the world, and

this

perspective should be emphasized more,

and

Correct word choice

as

show examples

there are more compelling rationales. The primary reason is that sharing information between

countries

could create a variety of synergy effects, it can help the people of

countries

to understand each other.

Moreover

, if people enjoy the same films, music, brands, TV channels, and so on each other, it can generate tremendous economic effects all over the world, and it can lead to economic development not only in developed

countries

but

also

in developing

countries

. Pondering

on

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the aforementioned statement, it is more reasonable to take the latter view as the established

opinion

. the merits of

globalizaition

Correct your spelling

globalisation

should not be overlooked. In conclusion,

although

becoming less different between

countries

could have some disadvantages, I am of

opinion

Correct article usage

the opinion

show examples

becoming fewer differences between

countries

has much more considerable implications all over the world.