Forests produce fresh oxygen and participate in regulating climate. But every year tree cover of our planet is lessening due to deforestation. What are the primary causes of deforestation? To what results may it lead?

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Forests
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are the lungs of the earth and maintain the eco-balance. Reduction in forest areas will affect
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survival. Urbanisation and agricultural expansion primarily have caused deforestation. Eventually, it will lead to a hotter
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and less availability of
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for humans. In
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essay, the main causes of deforestation and the results which will lead will be discussed.
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with, the primary causes of
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in
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-producing
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which helped to maintain the atmosphere are urbanisation and agricultural expansion surging with time .
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, more and more people are opting
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urban lifestyle to achieve
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forest
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are converted into urban areas.
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, every year 2% of
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are changed into cities.
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, to bridge the gap
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food supply and demand, the woodland is transformed into agricultural land.
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, in the recent decade, 5% of jungles are cut down and utilised to grow grains and pulses.
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, the increase in urban areas and agriculture is causing the lessening of
trees
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.
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, the chief effects of causes will be a hotter
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and
oxygen
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deficit environment. First of all,
trees
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help to regulate the environment, if they are chopped down, the
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temperature of the globe will rise leading to a hotter
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which is not suitable for
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survival. As an example, every year globe’s kelvin goes up by 1 degree owing to the fewer number of
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all,
trees
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help in converting carbon dioxide to
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, their less number means less
oxygen
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for
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which is essential for mammals.
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instance, every year the
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available in the atmosphere
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down by 0.5% owing to
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the cutting
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down
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forests
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.
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, fewer
trees
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result in a hot
climate
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oxygen
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the oxygen
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supply. In summary, woodland which was the earlier source of
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is now transformed into concrete jungles and farmlands because of overpopulation. All of
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will result in hot earth will low levels of
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which is not suitable for humans.
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,
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measure should be taken to protect
trees
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