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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to apply for the post of
the
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waiter at your restaurant in Mississauga city. Currently, I am working as a Barista in a local bar in Mississauga. My current job is to serve customers' orders to their table without any delay.
Also
, I deliver food in the evening. I would like to apply for the waiter post in your restaurant Let me explain my area of work. I have been in the food industry for the past 10 years.
Also
, I have completed a diploma course in customer management.
This
 will help me suit myself for
this
 waiter's job. If I am given a chance, I will do level my best would attract more customers to your business. I hope you consider my application and call me for an interview. I am available between 12 PM to 5 PM Monday to Saturday.Kindly let me know Thank you for your consideration Yours faithfully,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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