In
this
day and age, citizens especially want to find some
opportunities
and change
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making the move from their rural
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to the big
cities
with a desire for a career, a learning opportunity, or a desire to change lives. From my point of view , there are several
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why
people
migrate to
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areaFix the agreement mistake
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and the problems associated with it.
To begin
with, young
people
leaving is that the business and career
opportunities
offered in
cities
isChange the verb form
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appealing.
For example
,
it is clear that
in Vietnam , many multinational companies
such
as LG,
SamsungCorrect word choice
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set up factories in the city
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,
provideCorrect word choice
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high qualityAdd a hyphen
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management job
opportunities
which attract a lot of workers.
As a result
, they can earn
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salaryFix the agreement mistake
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to make and meet.
In addition
, big
cities
have more educational
opportunities
, with better resources and advanced technology.
Besides
studying in class, students need to search for learning materials from large
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to
meetingWrong verb form
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theChange the word
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learning needs of students.
Moreover
, the city
centerChange the spelling
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with a series of commercial
centersChange the spelling
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, bookstores, used bookstores,
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fun activities, entertainment, shopping... taking place regularly will help students relax after a
nerve rackingAdd a hyphen
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day.
However
, there can be disadvantages
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such
moves.
Firstly
, traffic congestion and industrial manufacturing are prominent features of the urban landscape, which take their toll on the natural environment and those who depend on it.
For instance
, air pollution from both cars and factory emissions
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the health of countless urban residents.
, crime rates are significantly higher in densely populated urban regions than in rural areas. Because urbanization entails migration or immigration of
people
from rural areas to
cities
.
This
can lead to consequences
such
as an increase in the number of
people
and the rate of unemployment.
In conclusion, with a better economy,
cities
provide their residents with better welfare. I think the government should
also
take measures to solve traffic problems
as well as
crime rates so that
people
have a better life.