■The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. ■Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

■The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

    ■Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of British in different age groups donating
money
to
charity
between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the two middle age groups aged 36-65
years
donated significantly greater
money
to charities compared to the rest of the population,
while
people
aged 18-25
years
made the least donation in 1990.
On the contrary
,
people
aged 51-65
years
donated the most in 2010 and teenagers aged 18-25
years
gave relatively lesser
money
to
charity
. In 1990,
people
in the 36-50 age
group
donated 43% of the
money
to
charity
. The grant made by the 51-65
years
group
was 10% different from the previous
group
.
People
aged 26-35
years
and over 65
years
gave almost the same amount of cash to
charity
, accounting for around 33% each. There was roughly 28% of donations made by the population below 25
years
in the same period. Interestingly, most of the grant was given by the
group
of 51-65
years
in 2010, just slightly below 40%. The
group
aged 36-50
years
and above 65
years
donated a similar amount of
money
, accounting for 35% each.
While
people
aged 26-35
years
made approximately 24% contribution to
charity
, the
group
below 25
years
made the least donation, just slightly above 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, charity, years, people, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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