Task 1 Academic: The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland between 1980 and 2020.
The line graph demonstrates the
cheese
consumed by people living in the four regions per annum from 1980 to 2020.
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Overall
, Linking Words
cheese
consumption among people living in England and Scotland declined, Use synonyms
while
the number of people in Wales and Northern Ireland intaking Linking Words
cheese
rose gradually over the reporting period.
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Although
England and Scotland had the highest intake of Linking Words
cheese
before 1990, Use synonyms
both
peaking at around 110kg, they Use synonyms
both
underwent a constant fall after 1990. Use synonyms
In particular
, the number of Scottish eating Linking Words
cheese
dropped dramatically to 70kg in 2000. Since Use synonyms
then
, the figure had experienced a continuous decrease, ending at just above 50kg in 2020, becoming the second Linking Words
last
region eating Linking Words
cheese
.
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While
Wales and Northern Ireland were reported to have the lowest Linking Words
cheese
consumption before 1990, accounting for 60kg and 25kg, respectively, they Use synonyms
both
witnessed an upward trajectory. In 2010, Use synonyms
both
regions experienced the greatest Use synonyms
cheese
consumption of around 75kg and 55kg. From 2010 onwards, the Use synonyms
cheese
intake flattened out for Use synonyms
both
cities.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cheese, both, kg with synonyms.
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