Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
The external look usually has an important value to many
people
. This
led to an argument about whether the outside looks really tell anything about the people
's personal details. While
some people
argue that this
looks explains things, I believe that this
view is very superficial and people
should not be judged by this
.
The idea of judging individuals just only by their outside looks is against the right behaviour. In our modern life, citizens gain information and acquire knowledge about how to interact and behave in a good way
with other individuals from an early age at school and university. For example
, a child who goes to school will learn that we should kindly treat all the other children no matter their outside look including their clothes. In this
way
, the view of making an opinion about others by their look seems to be the wrong thing to do.
Moreover
, making an opinion on others because of their external view might be due to
stereotypes. There is a variety of cultural costumes in the world and people
use to connect these clothes to people
's level of education or way
of thinking. To illustrate this
, if someone travels to Africa, he or she might expect to meet people
with no clothes on and wild animals in every corner which is not true. This
is why people
should not try to judge people
in this
way
.
In conclusion, some people
think that they can understand others by what they are wearing. I believe that this
is not the case because its a bad behaviour and usually it is a wrong answer.Submitted by ahmedelhanshiry on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite