Education for young people is important in many countries. However, others think government should spend more money for education in adult population who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, many argue that young
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need to be given more knowledge than the elderly. but some believe that the government should
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teach the elderly to read and write. I absolutely disagree with
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opinion, because, first of all, the future is in the hands of young
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, the elderly
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need knowledge. On the one hand, it is very important to provide and support
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conditions for young
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to receive good knowledge, since our state is
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beneficial for the country if it increases attention to young
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, now young
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come up with a lot.
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, the memory of young
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is much better than that of the elderly. After the age of 27, a person's memory begins to fade.
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, mature generations can do many things because they are more energetic and mentally stronger than the elderly. The elderly,
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, should not be forgotten, as they may not have had the same conditions at a young age.
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, many elderly
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could not write in Latin, so some considered it important to teach them. It is
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useful for young
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when the elderly are educated, because the elderly
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when educated, can serve as an example for young
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, the elderly may have family concerns
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not being able to take the time to study. In conclusion, it is not at
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time necessary to invest heavily in the education of the elderly. Because the future is in the hands of young
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, so it is better to invest more in young
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • education
  • young people
  • government
  • money
  • adult population
  • read
  • write
  • development
  • nation
  • improve
  • quality of life
  • investing
  • reduced
  • poverty
  • income inequality
  • funds
  • balancing
  • budget allocation
  • crucial
  • equal access
  • opportunities
  • promoting
  • literacy
  • numeracy
  • positive effects
  • society
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