Education for young people is important in many countries. However, others think government should spend more money for education in adult population who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many argue that young
people
need to be given more knowledge than the elderly. but some believe that the government should
also
teach the elderly to read and write. I absolutely disagree with
this
opinion, because, first of all, the future is in the hands of young
people
.
Secondly
, the elderly
also
need knowledge. On the one hand, it is very important to provide and support
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conditions for young
people
to receive good knowledge, since our state is
also
beneficial for the country if it increases attention to young
people
.
For example
, now young
people
come up with a lot.
Also
, the memory of young
people
is much better than that of the elderly. After the age of 27, a person's memory begins to fade.
In addition
, mature generations can do many things because they are more energetic and mentally stronger than the elderly. The elderly,
on the other hand
, should not be forgotten, as they may not have had the same conditions at a young age.
For example
, many elderly
people
could not write in Latin, so some considered it important to teach them. It is
also
useful for young
people
when the elderly are educated, because the elderly
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when educated, can serve as an example for young
people
.
In addition
, the elderly may have family concerns
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not being able to take the time to study. In conclusion, it is not at
this
time necessary to invest heavily in the education of the elderly. Because the future is in the hands of young
people
, so it is better to invest more in young
people
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • education
  • young people
  • government
  • money
  • adult population
  • read
  • write
  • development
  • nation
  • improve
  • quality of life
  • investing
  • reduced
  • poverty
  • income inequality
  • funds
  • balancing
  • budget allocation
  • crucial
  • equal access
  • opportunities
  • promoting
  • literacy
  • numeracy
  • positive effects
  • society
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