The two maps illustrate the external and internal changes in the design of a health centre that happened from 2005 until the present day
The two maps show the external and internal changes in the design of a health centre that happened from 2005 until the present day .
In general, we can see from the visual that the building experienced both external and internal development .
To start with , the external changes involved the repositioning of the entrance which was at the south to relocate to the left side in the west of the building .
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, the back garden was shrunk in comparison to the previous map and the building was expanded at the expense of the garden , Linking Words
in addition
, the car park at the south was developed to occupy 30 cars . Moving on to the internal development, in the northwest , a Minor operation room and extra CR place have been introduced , Linking Words
also
, the reception room was relocated to the left side of the entrance and combined with the Children`s play area as new facilities , Linking Words
while
the physiotherapy place experienced no change. Linking Words
Finally
, the open area was enlarged in size and relocated to the middle of the building .Linking Words
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