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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers

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The majority of the people attaining adulthood spend most of their time at
work
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, In
this
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 context,
job
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 satisfaction for one's own well-being is more important than anything. Considering
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 importance, certain factors including, working
environment
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 and pay scale contribute to their thirst to live satisfactory
life
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 at
work
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.
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, to meet all these conditions
are
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 just like a dream for some
workers
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. In
this
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 modern world, we see one's own salary and working
environment
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 which makes
workers
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 satisfied or unhappy.
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, a person needs to
work
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 from 7am and his or her shift ends by 5pm which is almost 10 hours and
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, they are paid a good salary but their manager somehow lacks cooperation, colleagues around are not friendly either,
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 an
environment
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 leaves them with the option to let their
job
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 loose. The situation is vice versa, with
good
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environment
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 but a low pay scale leads to a similar situation.
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 all the elements included above are important for the
workers
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 to be satisfied. Achieving
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 conditions for the
workers
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 are long way to go being a developing country for now.
Job
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 seekers fail to get the
job
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 they want.
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, their college degree is in business administration and they have to somehow get employed at the ECCD facilitator.
This
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 not only leaves them with an unsatisfactory
job
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 but
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 a failing working
environment
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, which is not at all familiar with their undergraduate qualifications. When seeing
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 situations realisation in
job
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 satisfaction is way far to achieve.
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, pay revision,
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job oriented
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 studies and a good
environment
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while
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 at
work
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 play a major role in
job
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 satisfaction. To achieve
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, it has to go far but one day or other it has to reach and have to aim to fulfil its goal.

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coherence cohesion
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Support your main points with specific examples or reasons. Make sure the examples are directly related to the point being made and fully developed.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task, providing a comprehensive response to the question. Make sure to cover what factors contribute to job satisfaction and the realism of job satisfaction expectations.
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Ensure that your ideas are clearly presented and easily understood. Avoid ambiguous statements and clarify your stance on the topic.
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Provide specific examples or evidence to illustrate your points about job satisfaction. This helps to underpin your argument and makes it more persuasive.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • job satisfaction
  • wellbeing
  • contribute
  • meaningful work
  • work-life balance
  • career progression
  • workplace environment
  • recognition
  • constructive feedback
  • compensation
  • benefits
  • job security
  • autonomy
  • skills match
  • interests match
  • variety
  • challenge
  • economic conditions
  • labor market
  • individual expectations
  • job role
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