You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: • • explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need explain how you will keep up-to-date while you're away suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

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letter in regard to a one month leave. Since my sister’s marriage got fixed in a hurry, I will be going to my country for its functions. As I received my parents' call yesterday and they need my assistance in organising these events, I would be leaving

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city on 7th April to reach my residence as soon as possible.

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, my return ticket is for 5th May as the wedding occasion would be wrapped by that time.

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, I would be doing my part on the weekend by accessing the website through my laptop.

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, if at any time you require any updates from my side,

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I would be available telephonically by calls and messages.

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, I already guided my assistant about the pending files and he would submit them in a day or two. And, for any

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so that office work does not suffer at all. Looking forward to meeting you soon after my return. Yours sincerely, Ryan Williams

Yogita Thu Mar 30 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

186 words

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