You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: • • explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need explain how you will keep up-to-date while you're away suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

this

letter in regard to a one month leave. Since my sister’s marriage got fixed in a hurry, I will be going to my country for its functions. As I received my parents' call yesterday and they need my assistance in organising these events, I would be leaving

this

city on 7th April to reach my residence as soon as possible.

Moreover

, my return ticket is for 5th May as the wedding occasion would be wrapped by that time.

Additionally

, I would be doing my part on the weekend by accessing the website through my laptop.

Apart from

this

, if at any time you require any updates from my side,

then

I would be available telephonically by calls and messages.

Furthermore

, I already guided my assistant about the pending files and he would submit them in a day or two. And, for any

further

support

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he will be playing my role in person whenever I am unavailable online

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so that office work does not suffer at all. Looking forward to meeting you soon after my return. Yours sincerely, Ryan Williams

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8 paragraphs

186 words

8.00

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