Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that
politicians
should assume the most of Use synonyms
responsibilities
in order to protect Correct pronoun usage
their responsibilities
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environment
. Add an article
the environment
Individuals
can contribute Use synonyms
these
acts Change preposition
to these
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in as
as
few portions. I mostly agree with Correct your spelling
a
this
suggestion because Linking Words
politicians
have the power Use synonyms
of
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to
communicate
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communicating
other
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with other
leaders
in order to take Use synonyms
a
massive action about environmental issues. Correct article usage
apply
Additionally
, they have been entitled by Linking Words
community
to manage some preservation, Add an article
the community
regulate
some laws in favour of Correct word choice
and regulate
Use synonyms
environment
.
Add an article
the environment
Firstly
, Linking Words
politicians
have possessed to make communication with other regions’ Use synonyms
politicians
in terms of environmental policies. Use synonyms
Leaders
and ministers from every part of the world can collaborate to solve environmental issues. Use synonyms
For instance
, in Kyoto Summit, many Linking Words
leaders
signed a protocol to alleviate climate change and these Use synonyms
leaders
have implemented certain rules in terms of consumption and production in their countries. Use synonyms
In addition
, some countries charged some Civil Organized Groups Linking Words
such
as Greenpeace to fix some environmental pollution. Linking Words
Individuals
cannot take roles in these stages. Use synonyms
Thus
, Linking Words
politicians
ought to take some responsibility.
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Secondly
, Linking Words
politicians
are chosen and empowered by Use synonyms
public
to undertake these duties. They have Add an article
the public
power
to Correct article usage
the power
managing
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manage
protection
of Correct article usage
the protection
Use synonyms
environment
with their funds, organizations and authorities. To illustrate that, governments can organize many events to erect trees in Add an article
the environment
a
barren land. Correct article usage
apply
Besides
, Linking Words
politicians
have a force to regulate some laws in favour of natural life. With these legislations, preserving Use synonyms
the
nature may become easier. Correct article usage
apply
Individuals
can help Use synonyms
these
situations only at Change preposition
in these
the
events. Correct article usage
apply
Thus
, Linking Words
politicians
should handle these acts first.
In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with Use synonyms
this
suggestion. Even though, some Linking Words
individuals
take big roles to ignite public awareness and some actions in favour of environmental protection. In my opinion, Use synonyms
politicians
’ actions are more effective to preserve Use synonyms
Use synonyms
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the environment
environment
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environments
such
as collaborations with Linking Words
counterpart
and regulations. 43 dk.Fix the agreement mistake
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