Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts compare the sale of coffee and banana among 5 nations in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
, the sale of coffee and banana increased in 5 nations, except Sweden
and Denmark
which witnessed a minimal drop in 2004.
Following the coffee table, it ranked first in the UK in 2004 and increased by 18.5. Moreover
, Switzerland doubled in and reached six; however
, Denmark
and Sweden
saw a slight rise of 0.2. In addition
, Belgium stood at one in 1999 and hit 1.7 in 2004.
Going forward to bananas, there was a dramatic increase although
Sweden
and Denmark
had a slight decrease respectively. Going into details, Switzerland stood at 15 in 1999 and saw a dramatic jump in 2004 and placed just under 50. The UK formed 1 in 1999 and increased significantly. Next,
the contribution of Belgium was just 0.6 in 1999 and rose slightly in 20044. Furthermore
, Sweden
and Denmark
fell; however
, the former experience a minimal decline and stood at one in 2004 and the latter witnessed a moderate drop in 2004.Submitted by mahsa_shafie1996 on
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