Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts compare the sale of coffee and banana among 5 nations in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, the sale of coffee and banana increased in 5 nations, except
Sweden
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and
Denmark
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which witnessed a minimal drop in 2004. Following the coffee table, it ranked first in the UK in 2004 and increased by 18.5.
Moreover
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, Switzerland doubled in and reached six;
however
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,
Denmark
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and
Sweden
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saw a slight rise of 0.2.
In addition
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, Belgium stood at one in 1999 and hit 1.7 in 2004. Going forward to bananas, there was a dramatic increase
although
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Sweden
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and
Denmark
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had a slight decrease respectively. Going into details, Switzerland stood at 15 in 1999 and saw a dramatic jump in 2004 and placed just under 50. The UK formed 1 in 1999 and increased significantly.
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the contribution of Belgium was just 0.6 in 1999 and rose slightly in 20044.
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,
Sweden
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and
Denmark
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fell;
however
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, the former experience a minimal decline and stood at one in 2004 and the latter witnessed a moderate drop in 2004.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden, denmark with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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