Nowadays, people of all ages from certain parts of the world spend most time at home rather than going outdoors. Discuss the reason . It is good or bad?
In the modern
era
most people like to stay at Add a comma
,era
home
rather than going
out to Wrong verb form
go
enjoy
. The main reason for Correct pronoun usage
themselvesenjoy
this
trend may be the development of social media platforms through which people can easily connect with the world. Though there is
both pros and cons Correct subject-verb agreement
are
of
Change preposition
to
this
phenomenon, in my opinion, it has more disadvantages than benefits
.
Firstly
, current
generation doesn't have the necessity to go out to meet others as there are so many other modalities available for them to connect with people. Correct article usage
the current
For instance
, men and women of all ages have access to social media such
as facebook
, Change the capitalization
Facebook
omegle
, Correct your spelling
google
twitter
, Instagram etc. through which they can gather Change the capitalization
Twitter
information
they needed and meet men and women from faraway countries. Add an article
the information
Moreover
, there are
enough entertainment at Change the verb form
is
home
, such
as television, Netflix, playstation
, Correct your spelling
PlayStation
home
theatre etc. In addition
, you can order meals or drinks from home
through various delivery apps namely Uber, pick me
, Pizza hut etc. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Therefore
, many choose to stay in their rooms and enjoy snacks while
watching a movie. Additionally
, unlike previous generations, today's young ones don't have the need to go to private classes to attend lectures as most of those are happening online through Zoom.
Secondly
, this
indoor trend has both benefits
and bad effects. There are few
Correct article usage
a few
benefits
such
as safe
environment, Correct article usage
a safe
less
accidents, Change the quantifier
fewer
lesser
chance Correct article usage
a lesser
for
drug or alcohol addiction, risky sexual behaviours and gang culture. Change preposition
of
On the other hand
, this
tradition will make men and women isolated from the rest of the world. They will miss out on all outdoor entertainment namely hanging out with friends, travelling, hiking, playing cricket, going to real football games etc. In addition
, staying indoor
leads to a sedentary lifestyle, which is harmful to human health as it is associated with Correct your spelling
indoors
increased
risk of developing obesity and heart disease. To give an example, children choose to play Correct article usage
an increased
playstation
games rather than playing physical sports which leads to isolation and depression.
Correct your spelling
PlayStation
To conclude
, even though there are certain benefits
in this
tradition of staying in rooms, in my view, it has lead
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led
public
to live an isolated, unhappy and unhealthy life. Add an article
the public
Therefore
, I think it has more negatives than positives.Submitted by anushanthbatti on
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