Nowadays, people of all ages from certain parts of the world spend most time at home rather than going outdoors. Discuss the reason . It is good or bad?

In the modern

era

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most people like to stay at

home

rather than

going

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out to

enjoy

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themselvesenjoy

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. The main reason for

this

trend may be the development of social media platforms through which people can easily connect with the world. Though there

is

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both pros and cons

of

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this

phenomenon, in my opinion, it has more disadvantages than

benefits

.

Firstly

,

current

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generation doesn't have the necessity to go out to meet others as there are so many other modalities available for them to connect with people.

For instance

, men and women of all ages have access to social media

such

as

facebook

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,

omegle

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google

,

twitter

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, Instagram etc. through which they can gather

information

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the information

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they needed and meet men and women from faraway countries.

Moreover

, there

are

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enough entertainment at

home

,

such

as television, Netflix,

playstation

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PlayStation

,

home

theatre etc.

In addition

, you can order meals or drinks from

home

through various delivery apps namely Uber, pick

me

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apply

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, Pizza hut etc.

Therefore

, many choose to stay in their rooms and enjoy snacks

while

watching a movie.

Additionally

, unlike previous generations, today's young ones don't have the need to go to private classes to attend lectures as most of those are happening online through Zoom.

Secondly

,

this

indoor trend has both

benefits

and bad effects. There are

few

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a few

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benefits

such

as

safe

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environment,

less

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fewer

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accidents,

lesser

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a lesser

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chance

for

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of

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drug or alcohol addiction, risky sexual behaviours and gang culture.

On the other hand

,

this

tradition will make men and women isolated from the rest of the world. They will miss out on all outdoor entertainment namely hanging out with friends, travelling, hiking, playing cricket, going to real football games etc.

In addition

, staying

indoor

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indoors

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leads to a sedentary lifestyle, which is harmful to human health as it is associated with

increased

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an increased

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risk of developing obesity and heart disease. To give an example, children choose to play

playstation

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PlayStation

games rather than playing physical sports which leads to isolation and depression.

To conclude

, even though there are certain

benefits

in

this

tradition of staying in rooms, in my view, it has

lead

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public

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to live an isolated, unhappy and unhealthy life.

Therefore

, I think it has more negatives than positives.