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Being a celebrity –such as a famous film start or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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Well-known
people
such
 as film stars and sports players always draw attention around the world, and many
people
 admire their luxurious
life
.
However
, there is a long-standing debate about whether or not the advantages
by
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 being famous overweigh the disadvantages.
Although
 I understand there are downsides, I believe well-known positions are valuable. On the one hand, status in society can be taken advantage of in a variety of situations. PIV services or first class on flights are
the
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examples. Ordinary
people
 have no access to these special benefits because of a lack of fame or connection.
For example
, Japanese traditional entertainment places, where only rich
people
 are allowed to enter, still exist and
the
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introduction from
the
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former clients is required
to
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 new visitors.
The reputation
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 and money could lead to more opportunities to build new connections and widen individual perspectives.
On the other hand
, the media always use celebrities for their coverage
due to
 the fact that their gossip increases sales significantly.
Consequently
, paparazzi always try to reveal secrets and the invasion of privacy has become a serious problem.
For example
, Megan, who was married to Prince Henry, was chased by the media
everyday
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 and she felt threatened and suffered from depression. Her
life
 was completely changed by becoming famous. Revolution to sacrifice some personal privacy to a certain extent may be inevitable.
To conclude
, even though being
famed
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 has some downsides, which are related to privacy and mental conditions, in my opinion, glamorous
life
 can expand the possibilities of unextraordinary experiences in
life
.
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