The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist's work after five years.

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist's work after five years.
The following chart illustrates the destination of
anthropology
graduates from one university.
In addition
, the following table demonstrates the
salaries
of the
anthropology
in
work
after five years.
Overall
, the biggest
percentage
of the destination of
anthropology
is full-time
work
52%.
In addition
, those who graduated in
anthropology
can
work
3 kinds of sectors
such
as freelance consulter, government sector, and private companies. The
percentage
of the government sector and freelance consulter have increased after 5 years.
To begin
with, the maximum destination of
anthropology
graduates is full-time
work
at 52%. The second-ranked is part-time
work
at 15%. The third-ranked is unemployed at 12%. The fourth-ranked are full-time post-graduate study and unknown at 8%. The
last
one is part-time
work
+ postgraduate at 5%. The biggest
percentage
of
salaries
about 25,000-49,999 is private companies at 10%. In 50,000_74,999, The biggest
percentage
of
salaries
is private companies at 35%. In 75,000_99,999 The biggest
percentage
of
salaries
is freelance consulter at 40%. In the upper ,100,000 The biggest
percentage
of
salaries
is the government sector at 50%.
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