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In the future, nobody will buy printed paper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Since the introduction of the internet,
people
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 search for most of the information they require online.
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 made some
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believe that in the future no one will buy printed materials. Personally, I disagree with
this
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 idea. Currently, Fewer
books
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 are sold in bookshops and libraries for many reasons. The information contained in these
books
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 is widely available online. It is even easier to search for the specific information needed online rather than looking for it in
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.
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 there are some
people
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 who still prefer
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, it is becoming less profitable for publishers to print them.
In addition
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 to that, buying
books
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 and papers in a physical form harms the environment by cutting trees. On top of that, a recent report showed that only a small fraction of used
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 are recycled. The majority of used
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 are discarded as waste.
Although
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 the use of physical
books
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 is declining, it is not completely going away for various reasons. There are still some
people
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 that only consume
books
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 in their physical form. Not all novels will be freely available over the internet. Copy write laws protect some written materials from being distributed online.
People
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 will continue to pay for them even if they are going to read those
books
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 in a digital form. In conclusion, I believe that the use of physical
books
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 is declining and
people
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 are turning towards freely available reading materials online.
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, I personally disagree that
books
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 and papers are going to be obsolete in the future.
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