You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain regarding the issues that I am facing
due to
living in sharing with another student which is impinging upon my academic performance
as well as
recreational time. Allow me to explain my situation, I am immensely disturbed by the loud music that my roommate loves especially at midnight.
However
, I prefer to that plan my work-related agenda for the next day at that moment rather than in the daytime.
In addition
to
this
, she
also
smokes in the room which causes me a headache as I do not smoke.
Moreover
, I always have meetings in the evening because I work from home sometimes. But, my room partner always comes at the exact period with a group of friends and they make loud noises.
As a result
of these issues, I am unable to concentrate on my business
due to
improper sleep and preparation. I request you please change my accommodation from a double bedroom to a single bedroom. I would love to stay alone
instead
of sharing with someone or I will not hesitate to pay extra money if needed. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Harwinder Kaur
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