The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
graph
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illustrates the changes in the
number
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of
shops
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that closed and newly opened from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
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, fewer
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were closed between 2016 and 2018 than between 2011 and 2014
while
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there was a downward trend in the
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of new
shops
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.
According to
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the
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, the
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of closed
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was relatively higher regardless of some fluctuations seen from 2011 to 2014. Starting at 6200 in 2000, it reached a peak of 7000 in 2013.
However
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, it experienced a dynamic drop to hit the bottom at 200 in 2015.
Then
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, the
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of closures accelerated suddenly in 2016 when the
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remained stable at 5000 until 2018. Regarding the
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of openings, there was a fewer
number
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of
shops
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newly opened for the 7 years.
Although
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as many as 8500
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started new businesses in 2011, it reduced dramatically by half in 2012.
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, it is interesting to note that almost an equal
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of
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were closed and opened in 2014. After that, the
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continued to follow a declining trend except from 2015 to 2017 when the
number
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of new businesses remained unchanged at 4000.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, number, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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