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A letter to company which is looking for help to renovate school building and you want to help for it In your letter - when you could start -what you could do - why you want to help

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Dear Sir/Madam My name is Injun Lee; I am writing
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 letter to inform you that I can dedicate myself to
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 to renovate the school building. As I am going to resign from my current
workplace
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 on the 28th of April, I can engage in the renovation works as of the 29th of April for a few weeks.
First
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 thing that I can assist
will
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 be making a structure or a renovation design which was my previous occupation if you request.
Furthermore
, as I have a certificate
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 a computer programming course, I can give you a hand
for
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 computer tasks,
such
 as organising or writing documents. Obviously, if physical workforces are required, I can participate in the construction department as well. Honestly, I have respected the renovation
works
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 that you have done so far in Brisbane. I desire to have opportunities to learn ways to renovate buildings next to you as an apprentice. I really appreciate it if you give me a chance to learn. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Injun Lee
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