A letter to company which is looking for help to renovate school building and you want to help for it In your letter - when you could start -what you could do - why you want to help

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Dear Sir/Madam My name is Injun Lee; I am writing

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letter to inform you that I can dedicate myself to

help

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to renovate the school building. As I am going to resign from my current

workplace

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on the 28th of April, I can engage in the renovation works as of the 29th of April for a few weeks.

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thing that I can assist

will

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be making a structure or a renovation design which was my previous occupation if you request.

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, as I have a certificate

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a computer programming course, I can give you a hand

for

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computer tasks,

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as organising or writing documents. Obviously, if physical workforces are required, I can participate in the construction department as well. Honestly, I have respected the renovation

works

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that you have done so far in Brisbane. I desire to have opportunities to learn ways to renovate buildings next to you as an apprentice. I really appreciate it if you give me a chance to learn. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Injun Lee

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

179 words

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A letter to company which is looking for help to renovate school building and you want to help for it In your letter - when you could start -what you could do - why you want to help

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