Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In
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day and age, environmental problems have become a major concern. Some people believe that the extinction of some
species
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of
plants
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and
animals
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is the biggest issue. Some others, including me, claim that there are other vital environmental issues we are facing.
Such
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as global warming. The
loss
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of particular
species
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of
plants
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and
animals
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, on the one hand, can have significant consequences for ecosystems, other
species
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, and even human societies.
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this
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can cause biodiversity
loss
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because each
species
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plays a unique role in an ecosystem, and the
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of single
species
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can disrupt the entire ecosystem.
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, when predator
animals
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like tigers and lions become extinct, it may lead to an increase in the number of other
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, which used to prey on,
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as deer and giraffes.
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, those prey
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can destroy agricultural crops or carry some diseases.
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,
this
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issue is not a major problem, as it can be caused
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global warming. If we can tackle global warming, it is likely to minimize the extinction of some
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of
plants
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and
animals
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.
On the other hand
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, nowadays, global warming has become an undisputed fact about our current livelihoods, which is caused by human activities,
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as burning fossil fuels, deforestation, and transportation.
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is not only harmful to human health but
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can be considered a main reason for the
loss
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of particular
plants
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and
animals
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. Because
this
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causes extreme weather events, like heat waves, droughts, and hurricanes, which make it difficult for some
species
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to survive. In conclusion, I believe that
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dying out some particular
plants
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and
animals
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can affect negatively our planet, it is not the major problem, because global warming can be more harmful to humans and
species
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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