Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In
this
day and age, environmental problems have become a major concern. Some people believe that the extinction of some
species
of
plants
and
animals
is the biggest issue. Some others, including me, claim that there are other vital environmental issues we are facing.
Such
as global warming. The
loss
of particular
species
of
plants
and
animals
, on the one hand, can have significant consequences for ecosystems, other
species
, and even human societies.
First,
this
can cause biodiversity
loss
because each
species
plays a unique role in an ecosystem, and the
loss
of single
species
can disrupt the entire ecosystem.
For example
, when predator
animals
like tigers and lions become extinct, it may lead to an increase in the number of other
animals
, which used to prey on,
such
as deer and giraffes.
As a result
, those prey
animals
can destroy agricultural crops or carry some diseases.
Nonetheless
,
this
issue is not a major problem, as it can be caused
due to
global warming. If we can tackle global warming, it is likely to minimize the extinction of some
species
of
plants
and
animals
.
On the other hand
, nowadays, global warming has become an undisputed fact about our current livelihoods, which is caused by human activities,
such
as burning fossil fuels, deforestation, and transportation.
This
is not only harmful to human health but
also
can be considered a main reason for the
loss
of particular
plants
and
animals
. Because
this
causes extreme weather events, like heat waves, droughts, and hurricanes, which make it difficult for some
species
to survive. In conclusion, I believe that
while
dying out some particular
plants
and
animals
can affect negatively our planet, it is not the major problem, because global warming can be more harmful to humans and
species
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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