The pie charts shows how many hours spent in a British university library by undergraduates, postgraduates, and all student.
The pie charts
shows
how many hours Change the verb form
show
spent
in a British university library by undergraduates, postgraduates, and all student.
It is clear from Add a missing verb
are spent
research
that Add an article
the research
post graduates
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postgraduates
students
spent more time
in library
than either total Add an article
the library
students
or other students
.
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, the overwhelming majority of those who are Fix the agreement mistake
example
graduates
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graduate
students
spent at least fifteen time
per week in comparison with average Change to a plural noun
times
students
. The figure
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figures
were
51 per Change the verb form
was
cent
and 15 per cent
respectively. Furthermore
, only seventeen per cent
of total students
spent time
in library
between one to seven hours, Add an article
the library
whereas
the average for all students
in this
category is a hefty 50 per cent
.
Meanwhile, for undergraduates
the pattern appears to be slightly different. The least Add a comma
,undergraduates
time
spent eight
or more hours per week (37 per Add a missing verb
was eight
cent
), but out of this
total 53 per cent
spent sixteen or more, which almost
a third of the corresponding figure for postgraduates level Add a missing verb
is almost
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