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The chart shows the number of international students studying at a UK university between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the number of international students studying at a UK university between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the line graph reveals the total amount of international
students
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 who studied at a university in Britain from 1995 to 2015.
Overall
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, it is clear to see that the number of
students
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 from Asia was the most, compared to the least of the African
students
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.
Furthermore
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,
students
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 from North America and Europe stayed a similar trend over the period of two decades. In 1995, the number of Asian
students
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 was by far the highest, at 60, which climbed gradually to the top, peaking at 120 in 2015, almost rising by 60.
By contrast
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, Europe and Africa experienced a similar development, remaining around 45 and 20 respectively through these twenty years,
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 there was a slight growth in terms of African
students
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 to approximately 25 in 2010
then
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 dropped to 20 in 2015.
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, the figure for North America showed two different periods, the first period was from 1995 to 2010, the data of
students
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 kept stable at approximately 40, next had a significant increase to a rough 65 in the
last
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 year.
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