The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts compared the
percentage
of the main reasons why people immigrated and emigrated to the UK in 2007. Use synonyms
Overall
, the most common reason for both immigration and emigration was Linking Words
definite
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a definite
the definite
job
, which had an approach Use synonyms
percentage
.
Starting with immigration, the definite Use synonyms
job
was the highest proportion, with 30%, Use synonyms
in addition
, the reason Linking Words
of
formal study had a similar Change preposition
for
percentage
with the definite Use synonyms
job
, with 26%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, no reason stated only made up 6%, which was the lowest Linking Words
percentage
throughout all of the reasons. Looking for work, accompany and other had around half of Use synonyms
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percentage
of formal study, with 12%, 15% and 11% respectively.
Moving onto emigration, 29% of British emigrated from the UK because of Add an article
the percentage
job
definition. There are Use synonyms
also
22% of residents Linking Words
move
out Correct pronoun usage
who move
the
UK owing to look for work. Change preposition
of the
However
, the Linking Words
percentage
of formal study only consisted of 4%, which was the lowest Use synonyms
overall
for the given items.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, job with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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