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The given picture illustrates the process and materials by which instant noodles are produced.

The given picture illustrates the process and materials by which instant noodles are produced.
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The given picture illustrates the process and materials by which instant noodles are produced. In general , the visual indicates that the procedure consists of several steps starting from receiving the raw material to producing the final products .
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the main row material which is the flour is transferred to the storage silos by special vehicles , and
then
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 the flour is transferred to the mixer which is mixed the flour with oil and water to produce
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dough
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 , after that the prepared
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 is converted to
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 sheets by rolling it
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 separated into strips . During the next stage , the
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 strips are melded
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 noodles discs and cooked in oil
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 dried. In the following stages ,the dried noodles discs
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 Vegetables and spices are added to the cups that are designed for
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 purpose , later the cups are labelled and sealed .
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 , the product is sent to the shops and consumed by eaters .
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