Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high School programs (for example working for a charity improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports youngsters).To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people have confidence in saying that unpaid community services should be made mandatory in high schools.I completely agree with

this

statement because it builds up

children

self confidence

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and

also

creates opportunities for them to discover goals in life. volunteering helps

children

build self-confidence.Some of the students are not good at their academics because they are not interested in it. Teaching them singing,dancing and other games like cricket and football helps them

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their talent.

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, in 2005 Brazilian Government organized talent Hunt programs in schools free of cost to introduce and improve voluntary skills among

children

.

As a

result

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they found many classical singers,dancers and cricketers and decided to make a team of each category to introduce them at an international level.

In addition

, serving their communities helps

children

find

theiraim

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their aim

their

in life. Many of them do not know why they have to go to school to learn subjects they did not even like.

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example

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if

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apply

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School management

initiate

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the volunteering class and

make

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it mandatory for everyone to join

specially

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in winter and summer holidays.So they can do whatever they want,

this

may increase their extra skills other than academics.

furthermore

, organising trips in which they go to polluted areas where

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taught by teachers about

plantation

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the plantation

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and make sure

children

to

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plant a tree

by

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their own

hand

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.It would definitely rises their interest towards a particular mission because by helping

community

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the community

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they become very compassionate and want to grow up to become people who can solve world huge problems. Once they have

this

goal they would even become passionate about

their

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studies

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can help them

achieving

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it. In conclusion,it is essential to inaugurate unpaid community services in schools, for one

thing

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it

increase

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children

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self-confidence and, for

other

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they can get a Moto for life.