Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some would argue that extreme
sports
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poses danger and should be banned by the
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in authority,
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others believe that they are free to do whatever they want to do. In
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essay, I will explore both views and provide my opinion. On one hand, banning dangerous
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not only prevents sportsmen from potential injury
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but,
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from imminent death.
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, as we all know, pose a high risk of harming one's body. Motor cross or bungy jumping,
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, the act of doing
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is highly risky and deadly where
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would jump to a high altitude and do some stances that strongly require zero error to avoid harming their selves.
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the merits of
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kind of sport are outstanding for the
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it's a matter of personal choice of doing it or not.
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,
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are free to do activities they are interested in. Freedom is what makes
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happy and enjoy life. Dictating
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about what activities they need to do is quite boring and frustrating ,especially for those
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where fun is at the extreme level.
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, cliff climbers, sea, and air divers found happiness and contentment in
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field of
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. In conclusion,I believe that the government should not ban dangerous
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, since it will prevent
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from exercising their freedom rights,
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, educating
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about its effect would be beneficial.
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, regardless of the kind of activity
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are engaged in, there is always a possibility of danger,
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extra precautionary measures should be observed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • severe injuries
  • fatalities
  • base jumping
  • bull running
  • extreme skiing
  • safeguard
  • well-being
  • regulating
  • avoidable harm
  • healthcare costs
  • burdening
  • personal freedom
  • autonomy
  • training
  • equipment
  • mitigated
  • personal satisfaction
  • mental health benefits
  • resilience
  • adventure
  • assess risks
  • public safety
  • unnecessary healthcare costs
  • outright bans
  • balanced approach
  • stringent safety standards
  • mandatory training sessions
  • adequately informed
  • safeguarding
  • public health
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