Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of town and cities than to build more housing . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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and cities than to build more housing . To what extent do you agree or disagree? disagree It is not surprising that some people hold the opinion that more trees should be planted in open spaces of towns. I don't completely agree with
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view as accommodations should be prioritized. 1 房子 很多人口 需要住房 2 而很多城市本来就面积很小 3 若是open area 是住房 不是树木的话 4 给书的话而不 房价上涨 人们的生活水平会 1 房子 2 3 4 1 树 2 有净化空气和提升环境的作用 3 人们可以在这里休息 4 提升人们的生活质量,降低
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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