The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the given charts depict projections for world production by
sector
in two periods, in 2040 and 2060.
In 2040, the services sector
(40%) will be the most sector
produced globally, and the second position is Manufacturing with a percentage of 31%. Next,
Info-Com Tech will produce approximately 15%. The rest sectors given such
as Energy, Agriculture, and Material will still be under 10 per cent
.
Compared with the forecast for 2060, the Services sector
will slightly increase to 41%, and Manufacturing will boost by 3% during the period. Furthermore
, the Info-Com Tech sector
just rise 1 per cent
in 2060. However
, Energy and Agriculture will slightly decrease by around 4%.
Overall
, it can be seen that all of the sectors' prophesy enhance from 1 per cent
to 4 per cent
in 2060, meanwhile, Agriculture and Energy products will slightly decline.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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