THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE AVERAGE PERCENTAGES IN TYPICAL MEALS OF THREE TYPES OF NUTRIENTS ALL OF WHICH MAY BE UNHEALTHY IF EATTEN TOO MUCH.

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The pie chart illustrates information about the ratio of snacks of three different kinds of nutrients, which are not good for health if consumed in higher quantity.

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, what stands out from the chart is that most of the crowd intake

sodium

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eating supper.

whereas

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, most carbohydrate is consumed by people

while

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eating snacks.

Likewise

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, most of the saturated fat is absorbed by the population

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eating banquets. In the detail, almost 43% of

sodium

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, saturated fat and added carbohydrate are consumed by people

while

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eating feast.

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, around 42% of added carbohydrates, saturated fat and

sodium

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are intakes by crowds

while

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eating snacks.

On the other hand

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, not so far from 29% of

sodium

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, saturated fat and added sugar is absorbed by the population

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having lunch.

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, prior to 16% of added carbohydrates,

sodium

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and saturated fat are eaten by folks

while

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having breakfast.

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, there was an upward gradual trend in people in all these three nutrients

while

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eating banquet.

anishakumarileemaniFri Mar 31 2023

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

164 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

nutrients
average percentage
sodium
saturated fat
added sugar
unhealthy
intake
typical meals
breakfast
lunch
dinner
snacks
contribute
health implications
convenience
taste preferences
cultural habits
balance nutrient intake
maintain a healthy diet

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THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE AVERAGE PERCENTAGES IN TYPICAL MEALS OF THREE TYPES OF NUTRIENTS ALL OF WHICH MAY BE UNHEALTHY IF EATTEN TOO MUCH.

Write an essay to educated reader about the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities

Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

in the future all cars will driverless. do advantage outweigh the disadvantages?

It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.