THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE AVERAGE PERCENTAGES IN TYPICAL MEALS OF THREE TYPES OF NUTRIENTS ALL OF WHICH MAY BE UNHEALTHY IF EATTEN TOO MUCH.

THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE AVERAGE PERCENTAGES IN TYPICAL MEALS OF THREE TYPES OF NUTRIENTS ALL OF WHICH MAY BE UNHEALTHY IF EATTEN TOO MUCH.
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The pie chart illustrates information about the ratio of snacks of three different kinds of nutrients, which are not good for health if consumed in higher quantity.
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that most of the crowd intake
sodium
while
eating supper.
whereas
, most carbohydrate is consumed by people
while
eating snacks.
Likewise
, most of the saturated fat is absorbed by the population
while
eating banquets. In the detail, almost 43% of
sodium
, saturated fat and added carbohydrate are consumed by people
while
eating feast.
Moreover
, around 42% of added carbohydrates, saturated fat and
sodium
are intakes by crowds
while
eating snacks.
On the other hand
, not so far from 29% of
sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar is absorbed by the population
while
having lunch.
Whereas
, prior to 16% of added carbohydrates,
sodium
and saturated fat are eaten by folks
while
having breakfast.
However
, there was an upward gradual trend in people in all these three nutrients
while
eating banquet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • average percentage
  • sodium
  • saturated fat
  • added sugar
  • unhealthy
  • intake
  • typical meals
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • snacks
  • contribute
  • health implications
  • convenience
  • taste preferences
  • cultural habits
  • balance nutrient intake
  • maintain a healthy diet
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