The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram provides information on the entire process of instant Linking Words
noodle
manufacture.
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there are a total of eight steps involved in the production of instant noodles, from the storage of the flour at the beginning to the labelling and sealing Linking Words
at the end
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The whole manufacturing process starts with the flour being stored in huge silos and in the ensuing step, the flour will be mixed with water and oil in a mixer. The mixture is Linking Words
then
placed on rollers which turn it into dough sheets. Linking Words
Next,
the sheets are automatically cut into strips and later made into Linking Words
noodle
discs, just as we often see when we remove the cover of a cup Use synonyms
noodle
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The Use synonyms
noodle
discs are ready to be cooked and, usually, they are processed with oil and Use synonyms
then
dried. The dried noodles are going to be put into the cups, Linking Words
along with
some vegetables and spices. The Linking Words
last
step before the instant noodles are sold is that people will put labels on the cups and the final product will be sealed.Linking Words
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