Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying to alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is said that in recent years, an increasing number of
people
who have some health disease are preferring other medicines
with a unique method of treatment instead
of visiting their doctor. I think that this
is an absolutely negative development for several reasons.
To begin
with the current occasion, these days, people
prefer to go to other medical centres in order to get unusual treatment instead
take these methods of treatment from their usual doctors
. I think that a number of people
who have some health problems
go to their relatives who work as a doctor in order to solve them. But, others go to the doctors
who could 100% believe them. Because of this
, it would be safe and affordable. However
, people
are becoming gullible. This
means that if they watch kinds of advertisements about other popular medicines
, they go there very quickly as much as possible. Then
, they could face some problems
after they participate in other medicines
such
passed away. Because of this
, in popular medicines
work a huge number of doctors
have great finance. In other words
, they passed a serious exam with the help of money.
In my opinion, it is not a good idea that people
start to go to other stranger medicines
instead
of going to their doctors
. As I can see, the medical field is growing significantly. As a result
of this
, the majority of students who are teenagers are becoming interested in this
field. This
means that lies could become common, for example
,at the time of examination, the majority of students accepted jobs with the help of money. In other words
, when those doctors
face the situation in order to save people
’s lives, because of the lack of knowledge they could make something unforgivable.
In conclusion, people
who have health problems
go to strange hospitals that could solve the problems
with unusual treatments instead
visit their usual doctor. In my opinion, this
is an absolutely negative development for several reasons.Submitted by moxinurabjalilova on
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