Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • thank your friend • explain how useful the present is • arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon

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Dear Mehmet, I'm writing

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letter to thank you for my birthday present. It made me very happy and I won't forget how thoughtful

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is. I was told that I need a smartwatch for my medical situation. After a heart attack, I need to check my heart rate or blood pressure. I added my partner as an emergency contact so, if something bad happens to me, he gets a call. I think

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technology is amazing! Plus, I loved all the functions. I can use it as a credit card. As I forget my wallet all the time,

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function will be useful to me.

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, I can check my e-mails anytime. Anyways, I hope you are available

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weekend. I am planning a dinner party

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Saturday and you will be welcome here. I am going to cook something in Turkish cuisine there will be vegan options so, you can invite your girlfriend, too. Best wishes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

158 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

sincerely appreciate
generous gift
means a lot
truly grateful
thoughtfulness
perfect timing
came in handy
can't thank you enough
catch up soon
make plans to meet

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