Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • thank your friend • explain how useful the present is • arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon

Dear SIMON JohneS

This

is to express thanks for the gift . I am really happy and glad to receive a tablet as a gift from you. I am really looking forward to using it . The gift is really nice. As I was really planning to buy one from the shop.

Although

I can use it now for project research and development work , It will help me in completing my official work on time. As previously I have to go to the cyber cafe to download research material and save it on my google drive.It will increase my efficiency so that I can complete projects before deadlines.

Furthermore

, I like to meet you in person to express my gratitude. We can meet in a restaurant and enjoy lunch or dinner.

Moreover

,I am eager to host you . please let me know when I can meet you so that we can plan the schedule like the date and time. Looking for a quick response . Cheers Michel Brendon

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

169 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

sincerely appreciate
generous gift
means a lot
truly grateful
thoughtfulness
perfect timing
came in handy
can't thank you enough
catch up soon
make plans to meet

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Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • thank your friend • explain how useful the present is • arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreighn language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You have arranged a weekend holiday with a group of friends, but due to your studies you will now be unable to go with them. Write to your friends: -Tell them why you are unable to go. -Say sorry for this. -Suggest an alternative activity at another time.

With access to internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should limit access to the internet for their children. Do you agree?

Smart phones and other similar electronic gadgets have reduced the contact between friends. Discuss how far you agree with this statement.

In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?