The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

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the maps given illustrate the renovations which happened to the town in the time period between 1780 to 1860 and 2000.

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, it can be seen that there has been no change in the position of the river and as time went by, the town was modernised gradually and more people started constructing accommodation there. a lot of changes were made between the years 1860 and 2000.

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, in the area where the four farms used to be in 1780, two of them shut down and a bridge was constructed to cross the river in 1860. there was an addition of a village and there was

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a road built from the upward riverside to the village area for travelling. in 1780 there were 100 residences

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, in 1860, 100 more residences were constructed.

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, almost half of the Forest was cut down for

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development. in the end, from 1860 to 2000 three more villages were added and 300 houses were built,making it 500 homes. the area of vegetation was completely demolished and was replaced by 2 schools and three sports fields. for the transport of the citizens, a road was built connecting villages and homes to the schools and sports fields. five shops were

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added on the bottom riverside followed by a wetland for birds

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of the river

anishakumarileemaniFri Mar 31 2023

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

225 words

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The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people say that main environmental problems of our time are due to lack of some specific species of plants and animals. Other says that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. Why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion.

In many modern societies, grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their parents. What do you think as the consequence of this?