Some peopre believe that the radio is the best way to get news .while ofhers believe thot 'lY is belter for lhis purpose. Discuss both views, ond give your opinion.
People
receive news
from different sources. This
essay shall compare two popular media from which people
receive news
- the radio
and the television. I believe that both have their own importance as far a
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as
news
is concerned, but TV
certainly has an edge over the radio
. Radio
,
can be accessed in a variety of situations. You need to sit in front of the Remove the comma
apply
TV
sets
to watch it, but inFix the agreement mistake
set
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the
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the radio
radio
you can put it in a pocket and listen to programs of your interest Add a comma
radio,
while
jogging at a park, driving, commuting to and from work, having meals or even lying on the bed with lights off and resting. Furthermore
, the news
script is also
different as a radio
newsreader has to describe the whole event through words and not to
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whereas
news
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the news
TV
newsreel is punctuated with long pauses when footage of some event is shown. Correct article usage
a TV
For example
, if a cricket sports match is going on, a radio
commentator will have to speak a lot more than what a TV
commentator will have to speak. This
is very helpful to those people
who cannot take a break from work, but still want to know what is going on in their favourite match. On the other hand
, TV
seems overwhelmingly
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to overwhelmingly
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outplay
radio
on various counts. Firstly
, it combines both sight and sound, which are the two major human senses for communication,
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, therefore,
therefore
more influencing
. Replace the word
influential
For
instance
if you hear a Add a comma
instance,
news
item about an accident, you may forget it soon, but if you have seen horrifying images ofthe
same accident on Correct your spelling
of the
TV
news
, you may not forget the impact on your mind for a long time to come. Secondly
, with the advent of the latest technology, the TV
has become as portable as the radio
. The smart phones
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smartphones
oftoday
have apps Correct your spelling
today
such
as'Hotsta/, which enable people
to watch news
on the go. Add an article
the news
To conclude
, both these media are not equivalent and interchangeable with each other, as they have unique characteristics. The television, however
, has a slight edge over the radio
because of its visualSubmitted by varshajose345 on
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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
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