You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorect. write a letter to the editor of the magazin.In your letter correct the information in the article explan why it is important for the magazin to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
to bring your attention to the mistake I observed in your magazine dated 28th January. I am a regular reader of your magazines and read all your magazines without fail.
However
, there is a mistake about the name of the current mayor of Ahmedabad and I think you should correct it as soon as possible. It is essential to correct the mistake as some people may find wrong information because of it. Many people go to the office of the mayor to express their problems but if they read a different name
then
it is difficult for them to find the right person to express their issues.
Therefore
, I suggest you correct the wrong name as soon as possible to avoid any confusion among your readers.
Additionally
, It will help you to stay away from any legal consequences if someone files a case against your firm if it is not corrected before it reaches
to
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the common people. I hope you will consider my suggestions. Yours faithfully, Kishan
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • incorrect information
  • misleading
  • rectify
  • significance
  • credibility
  • fact-based
  • accurate depiction
  • reliable sources
  • misinformation
  • influence public perception
  • tourist attraction
  • reputation
  • publish a correction
  • conduct research
  • consult local experts
  • accurate representation
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