The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The maps show a current industrial area to the east of Norbiton and redevelopment plans.
Overall
, the goal is to redevelop into a residential neighbourhood, with additional housing and other supporting facilities.
Currently, there is a roundabout that connects a southern and an eastern road
, with several factories in the area that are to be removed in the redevelopment.
The area around the eastern road
is to be for housing, a school at the end
, and a playground to the north. Another road
is planned to be added north from the roundabout and over a river, with housing along the western side of the road
. The farmland north of the river is to be replaced by additional housing where a road
parallel to the river is to be constructed and linked to the northbound road
. There are also
plans to construct another road
northwest of the roundabout. More housing is to be built along one side and at the end
of this
road
.
To the southwest of the roundabout, shops are planned to be constructed. Across the street to the southeast is to be a medical centre. A second roundabout is also
to be added where the south road
currently meets the main road
in a T-intersection.Submitted by anishakumarileemani on
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