On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost . Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company . In your letter •Describe the item you lost •Explain how you lost it •Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I lost my mobile phone during my holidays in London. I had a Samsung 21 cell and I bought it for 1800 Canadian dollars from a Bell company . It was black in colour and very light in weight . My phone had unlimited data storage capacity and had a black colour of cover on it . Actually, I stayed two days in your provided accommodation tour package . On the second day of the tour , I put my cell phone on the table in the room and after I went to the washroom for a shower but it was not there when I came out of the washroom after 20 minutes . After, I was afraid that someone picked up my mobile in my absence. Now, I have travel insurance in which you mentioned that you will cover the costs if anything would be lost during the tour . So, I would like to claim the costs of my cellphone and hope that you would be solved it soon . I am eagerly waiting for your reply . Yours sincerely, Rahul Sharma .
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