the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
The following two maps illustrate
road
access to a city hospital in two given years ( 2007 and 2010 ).
Overall
, there are four changes in road
access to a city hospital.
To begin
with, the public car park has been added on the east side of a city hospital. The second change is that it been added two roundabouts on the north and south hospital road
. The next change is the staff car park which has replaced the bus stop on the right side of the hospital road
. In addition
, there has been added the bus station on the left side of the hospital road
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