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Some people think that music lessons aren’t important and that children should pay more attention to science. Do you agree or disagree?

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Is
music
 really important? Surely, it is but many people would argue that children should focus on science and so the
time
 spent on
music
lessons
 is wasted. In
this
 essay, I am going to analyse the topic and share my opinion about it. Schools all around the world dedicate some
time
 to
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music
. It is likely to find
this
 subject in educational programs, especially for children.
As a consequence
, some of the hours that could be spent studying maths and other scientific subjects are dedicated to
this
 art.
Therefore
, they are often complaining about the inclusion of
music
 in the weekly schedule of their kids' school. From their point of view, instrument
lessons
 should be a hobby to fill their free
time
. What are the advantages of including
music
lessons
 in school? The first thing we may consider is that not all students have an attitude towards science.
Thus
, creative subjects can be helpful to them. In other terms, not everyone will become a doctor or a nurse and so it is good to leave them some
time
 to develop other types of skills.
Moreover
, it could be important to study
music
 in order to have a better understanding of the culture of our nation and other ones. The reason for
this
 is the importance of musical works throughout history.
Additionally
, students might need some
time
 to make up their minds after tiring courses to improve their productivity. In conclusion, I disagree with those who state that it is a waste of
time
.
Although
 not as important as other studies,
music
lessons
 can be I way to relax and to prove creativity.
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