Nowadays, more and more younger people need to compete with older people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What would you suggest as a solution?

As the

aging

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ageing

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of society has rapidly processed, many people try to postpone their post-retirement life.

This

phenomenon has led to competitive

job

hunting between youths and

seniors

. There are some negative impacts on society

such

as

unemployment

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rate and dependence of children on

parents

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their parents

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. I will cover some solutions in

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essay as well. In terms of problems,

seniors

usually have more knowledge and experiences which are often used as their

advantages

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and youths might have difficulty finding a

job

, which leads to an increase in

unemployment

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the unemployment

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rate in society.

For example

, civil servants are considered

as

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apply

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one of the most stable jobs in Japan and older generations have a tendency to extend their retirement age.

Therefore

, educated youngsters, who have

potential

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the potential

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to have successful careers if they are hired, need to give up their first choice and find

compromise

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.

Moreover

, if graduates can not seize a

job

opportunity, they feel depressed and lose their confidence. They might end up having no choice but relying on financial support from their parents. To solve these issues, one effective solution will be to offer sufficient social benefits to

seniors

which promotes early

retirements

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retirement

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. One alternative solution may be to hire new young people constantly and put

seniors

into tutor positions.

While

older people keep their standard of living, youngsters can learn knowledge and experience from

superiors

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their superiors

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.

However

,

this

costs more money and

this

strategy depends on companies’ budgets.

To conclude

,

job

competitions

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competition

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between

younger

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the younger

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generation and

older

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the older

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generation have been more and more severe

due to

the changed retirement age and

this

circumstance has brought social issues and

early

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the early

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retirement system should be enforced in many companies.