The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.
The 2 pictorial maps give information about a bookshop and how
this
facility has changed after introduction
of several facilities for the students or other people.
Add an article
the introduction
Overall
, there has been a dramatic alteration in the number of bookstore rooms
, namely the non-fiction room
has changed to the cafe and the number of tables apper
in the centre of the bookstore between 2000 and now.
Before the replacement took place, the bookshop, which was included some services for the visitors. The travel, the new books and the service desk Correct your spelling
appear
paper
rooms
were located in
the building entrance. There was Change preposition
at
very
large fiction Correct article usage
a very
room
on the top and again one small fiction room
next to it. The visitors could use little rooms
of
enjoying activities, Change preposition
for
such
as art, hobbies and cookery. Furthermore
, there was also
the
non-fiction Correct article usage
a
room
in the southernmost part of the shop.
Remarkably, by now, even though a lot of changes have been carried out there, some rooms
, for
example
new books, travel and service desk Add the comma(s)
,example
rooms
have been unchanged. Firstly
, cafe
appears to Correct article usage
the cafe
eating
Change the verb form
eat
of
visitors. Change preposition
apply
Then
lots of tables have been created for readers and the fiction has been became
Change the verb form
becoming
become
a
small which has been included relaxing Correct article usage
apply
rooms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rooms, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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