Employers somtimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information. Such as their habbies and interests, and whether thay are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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individual data like

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hobbies

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of interest

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candidates as part of the job application

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requirement

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opinion of some people that

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personal data

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the

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is convenient to deal with

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discuss

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the

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both

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of the statement in

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hand,The institution might be

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professional hours.Out of the work period , Beyond

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risk.The workers have their personal

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their personal choice.

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the higher officers take the

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and harm of the employee

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negetively

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negatively

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got harassed by the seniors. She got

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to keep

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relationship going against

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will and wish of her. Ignoring the desire of the boss,She had murdered.

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risk to disclose all the information to the office.

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of the candidate.Through the

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the

superviser

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supervisor

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an idea of the

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co-workers

not

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only know the potentiality but know behaviour ,psychology,likes and dislikes,

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and Psychology

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of the

worker

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resesult

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result

it

it

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helps to deal with the

worker

and

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easy

to take work from them.

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to that During

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an emergency

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emergency

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emergencies

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either physical or mental health

issue

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issues

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happen at the

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in case, It would be

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easy

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the concern

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concern

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family and

friend

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friends

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or the

persons

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health

details

are very much needed.A clear instance is that In India,The truck

driver

was driving the vehicle and

due to

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sleepery

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slippery

the truck got

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with a bridge Bars and the

driver

was seriously injured and he had taken to the hospital.The traffic police informed

to

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the truck

driver

's company and from the personal file of the

driver

they could know the health

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the dr to start the medication quickly and could save the

life

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also

informed the family members about the accident.

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personal data helped a lot. In conclusion,Keeping personal

informations

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information

pieces of information

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at

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the

jobside

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job site

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is part of the procedure to

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recruit

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cases it is

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,

however

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belive

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that it is

essencial

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essential

and needful

many a times

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many times

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.The company should keep

these information

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this information

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confidencial

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confidential

for

the

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safty

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safety

reason.