You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter - give details of your study plans - explain why you want to get a part-time job - suggest how your friend could help you find a job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear _______,

Dear Peter I am existing to tell you I will come to Melbourne to start my university in monash. I know you live in Melbourne for five years, so I think you may help me find a part-time job during my uni time.

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with, I will arrive on 13/11, but my orientation week will be after I arrived a week. here is my study plan and class schedule so that you can help me find a suitable job. I am already selected my timetable online, normally Monday to Thursday 9am-4pm, as you can see I will be free after 4pm or Friday to Sunday.

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I will achieve a document of my timetable that you can look up easily. As you know I never live in a city where can speak English, if I can work with local people that will really help my English,

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it is hard to understand what the teacher saying. On other hand, I know you are very busy during the workday and I do not

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a job, I will lovely to download it. Thank you ,Peter All the best 23/7/2023