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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it’s better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There is growing sentiment today that what is the most effective
study
 method for
students
. Some
people
 believe that it is better for
students
 to
work
 in teams,
while
 others think that they need to
study
 independently. From my point of view, I extremely believe that
students
 should
study
 and
work
 in groups because of its benefits. Those who advocate that
students
 should
study
 by themselves point out it helps
students
 have better focus and create independent
work
 habits.
People
 claim that if
students
 get familiar with independent
work
, they will form the habit of self-
study
, they can set goals, monitor, and evaluate their own learning growth, thereby being able to manage their own learning motivation because self-discovery is the core of learning.
For example
,
students
 who are professionals in independent
work
 can
study
, research, and find more knowledge without pushing from teachers or parents. They always being active with their
work
 and can manage it smoothly.
However
, there is no doubt to claim that working in groups brings more benefits than working alone. First of all,
group
work
 brings higher
work
 processing efficiency than working alone. With a big project, a person is hard to handle with the large of
work
's loads, but a team can be.
People
 should divide
work
 into smaller parts and give it to suitable
people
 in a
group
. Each person has their potential and it will help
work
 be completed easily and smoothly.
Secondly
, working in groups help
people
 improve their communication skills, teamwork skills, etc. In conclusion,
group
work
 brings more advantages than studying alone. I
also
 agree
group
study
 is more affection as so many come to share their wealth of knowledge and ideas.
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