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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it’s better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There is growing sentiment today that what is the most effective
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 method for
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. Some
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 believe that it is better for
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 to
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 in teams,
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 others think that they need to
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 independently. From my point of view, I extremely believe that
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 should
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 and
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 in groups because of its benefits. Those who advocate that
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 should
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 by themselves point out it helps
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 have better focus and create independent
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 habits.
People
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 claim that if
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 get familiar with independent
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, they will form the habit of self-
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, they can set goals, monitor, and evaluate their own learning growth, thereby being able to manage their own learning motivation because self-discovery is the core of learning.
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,
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 who are professionals in independent
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 can
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, research, and find more knowledge without pushing from teachers or parents. They always being active with their
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 and can manage it smoothly.
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, there is no doubt to claim that working in groups brings more benefits than working alone. First of all,
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work
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 brings higher
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 processing efficiency than working alone. With a big project, a person is hard to handle with the large of
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's loads, but a team can be.
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 should divide
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 into smaller parts and give it to suitable
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 in a
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. Each person has their potential and it will help
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 be completed easily and smoothly.
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, working in groups help
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 improve their communication skills, teamwork skills, etc. In conclusion,
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 brings more advantages than studying alone. I
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 agree
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study
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 is more affection as so many come to share their wealth of knowledge and ideas.
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